I had added these two quotes to my essay because I felt my main issue was not enough quotes to back up my commentary. The other quotes in my essay had seemed to be pretty decently placed and didn’t necessarily need editing.

-This is shown when Haas and Hahn finished one of they’re projects, “we needed to change, like, the venue because it couldn’t hold all the people, and everybody came together.”

-They had a thought, “could we just make something that looks nice so that if people look at the place and they already know that they are going to dislike it, and all of a sudden, they’re confronted with something beautiful?”